Es una historia bien escrita. Sentí mucho dolor por la protagonista al principio y como ella se sentía pero fue emocionante el final con la acciónes de Yuki. Me gustó mucho. Espero leer mas de estas historias. It was well written and I loved the action and suspense throughout the story. The main character held on to a small thread of hope being held captive enduring so much abuse until something extraordinary happened that changed her life forever. I loved the background information.
But I do not understand how anyone could write something like this... And actually empathise this much with the girl? Even though reading this makes me sick I'm... Stuck. This is so true, so close, so true, and no, no one WOULD help her or empathise... I'm kinda pretty scared of how this story is gonna go, but thank you, for writing it! ♡
Well, there are quite a lot of spelling errors and such, but the story is pretty good. The 'abuse' mentioned is very very bad, more like torture, if you're very senstitive you may be very disturbed. Still, giving 5 stars because dang, that ending was great. Also, there is a cg gallery and even background explanations. I would have liked more yuki, but apparently this is a spinoff of yuki's story. Thanks devs!
That god of death is super badass, she came in like a knight and rescued the princess! It's a shame you didn't make a yuri scene :/ You should make Haruka jump on her and kiss her!
I love this novel but it was a little short ,but overall it was great. At least I actually respect women unlike that bastard that was hurting Haruka. Sorry I do not have a Steam account. I would help if I did.
It was sad in some points but i really loved the fight scene and the ending. The way the scenes faded in and out with the music was great. Excellent job
I just finished reading this and even though its short oh my freaking god did it have an impact on me this has left me absolutely speechless it dosent bother me about the spelling mistakes and even though the artwrok is simple it works so well for something like this thank you for making this wonderful visual novel keep it up and i cannot give you enoigh praise on this and i hope all your future novels or endeavors are as great as this one great fantastic flipping job and loved it 5 stars ❤❤
This VN is not bad but I enjoyed trick and treat more. This plot should be longer. The bgm and the art is still great though. :)
The story is really short and the English isn't perfect, but I really enjoyed reading it. Please make more and add more artwork.
The story is great even though it was short but one QUESTION is that mysterious girl Yuki as in "Akketsu Yuki" from "Winter's Empty Mask"?
If you can't read it well do this get a book throw the book on the app and you wasted 20 seconds In your life
Rather dragged out parts, poor art, bit bland.
I hate genzan I hate the fact he was raping the girl and hitting her
I love every bit of it, but it's too short for me.. it should have been longer than that.. i finished it within just half an hour i think..
I loved it so much!!!! Can u Make another one? ! Pleace?! On Google play store please?!
I love how you made the stories, "winters empty mask" and "haruka winer dream", entertwin.
The story is really nice, detailed and beautiful writing. If this story becomes a book, ever, I would purchase it I immediately!!!
The story line, sound, graphics, all was cool.. And it was rare to bring a girl to save her, loved it
I do!not know!what to say well it's really impressive.
Short but good, makes me want to know the rest of the story
Want more of these!
Its not very bad
The build up from start was good but the climax was not satisfying. It lacks the "visual" part as it has more of wall of text than images. Props to the bgm it fits perfectly. Cant wait for longer version that you are currently doing.
I see where you're going with this and it's okay overall, but part of me wants to sympathize with the protagonist and part of me is like "Victim-Sue much?". I understand you're trying to get sympathy from the audience, but I just can't relate to a character that's pretty much the incarnation of the "tragic past" trope. That's Haruka's whole shtick, this lifetime of abuse. I can't find anything else about her that's likeable (not even the kitsune aspect and I am a sucker for those). Pity does not mean like.
Loved, absolutely loved it! My only issue is that the game was purely a visual novel in the sense that you only read and see what's happening you can't interact or she choices. Great story though, I find myself frustrated that there wasn't more.
Just as I thought, this is a cruel story. Nothing nice or cute about it. However, it's very interesting and I do no feel like I wasted my time with it as it usually the case with this game. I'm looking forward to the finish product.
I absolutely loved but I was less than happy that there were no choices, then I read the description and saw "kinetic novel". I felt like an ass for complaining to myself. Its a really great story and I highly recommend it!
I have read a few interesting VNs recently, but this one however is by far the most emotionally intune story VN aside that I have read in a long time, no other story has yet made me feel as if I were connected to the protagonist in such a way. I truely felt as if I were reading a diary of someone who has lost almost all hope in existence, and all I wanted to do was find a way to save her after the first few lines of the intro. Another masterpiece keep it up!
As in in japan im supposed to be grand reaper but there are shinigamis so yeah no one needs reapers XD. Real review: Characthers were great,art simple but good,story... uh abuse=torture= MAKES ME WANNA KILL GENZAN IMIDIATELY AND SAVE HARUKA WHEN SHE WAS 7. ARGH!!!! *punches wall.HARD!* I ABSOLUTELY HATE TORTURE. Overall good novel that is not complete please continue because that ending was not very good for me.
I don't think the story should have been made into a VN because it is not long to be a novel - maybe short story - , and also the visual part didn't add anything to the meaning and massage . The story itself was OK , but the number of unexplained events and things kept me from enjoying it , and the review wouldn't be enough to state them all .
It is a nice novel to read . thanks!u but it had some typical plot points and character backstory that made me not like this a little bit
Says mature but it is for everyone no bad content except for one sentence
You stop the story after chapter 1...write all others chapter you lazy...
Great job with the artwork! There are a couple of grammar errors in the English version other than that I love the game!
It was so horrible to even read . It was very SAD
No choices!! Just following along with a story!
I love the sentence that haruka say to fighting girl I just can be your friend
Needs to be a little longer and have different path to take.