The concept of this is interesting, but it felt kind of shallow. The character's personalities were pretty one sided, or, at the least, there wasn't enough honest, good interaction to allow them to have depth. The world is pretty cool, but it's just so insanely bad without sufficiently showing how it got that bad, why it's allowed to stay that bad, how something so terrible works, etc. The end result is it felt a bit like some pessimistic high schoolers rant about the evils of capitalism.
Why cant I save my data? Please help me. I'm doing very well here and I hate to repeat when thesecond episode shown up but when is the sequel?
Only problem is that it's too short but, besides that it is a great story and i can't wait to read the other stories in this series. btw when is the next story coming out.
Not my favorite one of these games. It was very short even for a part 1 of 3 and personally I wasn't very into the story. It's not the worst I've played though and your don't have to pay so it's at least worth checking out.
It's good but damn is it short. The ending left me feeling infuriated and excited at the same. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Its not bad but its not that good either. But i liked it. 4 stars. Also whens the next episode out? Im interested in it despite it being not good nor bad.
Not much to say. It kept me busy and it didn't make me frown. It's one of those part one things which irritate the **** out of me, but it's nice
After paying, i play until the page which a next chapter button come out. When i press it, it goes back to the page whether wan to play again... Where is my next chapter?
The game stoped just as I was getting hooked
In the middle of the story it ends abruptly. Doesn't make sense why.
It is a fun game and I love to make choices. And would love if they would have more games like this
But way too short, I'm not going to pay $3 for 1/5 of a game.
It's very good, but how come Rachel doesn't have a friend bar thing in the stats?
Interesting story line. Hope the next chapter comes out soon!
Best text based adventure I've played can't wait for the next part to be released
If they'll ever be available
Where is the rest of the story? Ends shortly and abruptly.
Looking forward to the next episode.
When's the next one coming out?
I loved it and I was hoping to find the rest of the series
Keeps me coming back for more.
I really love the story
Seeing as it's episode 1 of a 5 episode story I like that it's just long enough to get you interested while short enough not to ruin the other four episodes. Fans of this should definitely check out the herorise trilogy, which are NOT free, but well worth the price.
I found this interactive novel very fun and enjoyable. I hope to play more like it soon! Just one SMALL little thing. I would suggest that instead of having the player reset all the way to the beginning, that the player should be able to either load the last checkpoint, or last option they made, or start from the beginning. Other then that it really is a great game! I really recommend! Enjoy! :-D
It has an interesting story, decent number of choices but it's rather short. I only gave it 3 stars because of the length. It ended as the story was getting good. Can't wait to see where the story goes.
Good game but it is short. I would like to play more.
Good game but way too short. Thought it was going to be something longer like tin star or versus, instead it was two hops and a skip and your done. Hopefully the next one will come out quickly and longer.
I enjoyed playing this book. Looking forward to part 2 :)
I am excited for more chapters!
Good idea and engaging story, but it ends very abruptly. Far too short for my tastes. If possible I'd rate this 3.5 rather than 3.
Good, but too short
Way, way, way too short
It's too short if you do make a second one of these make it longer other than that it was good
Too short. Still, it IS free, soooooo. It is also a good story to begin with, I can't wait how you expand on it
There are far too many immersion-shattering typos for me to rate this highly. Additionally, it's painfully short, and the plot just doesn't move.
It's nice, but kinda short, and it has a couple typos (not as many as some would have you believe). Worth playing again... if only i could! The count down timer said 17 minutes to go, now, about 20 minutes later, it says i have to wait another 33 minutes.
There are typos here and there, but I've seen worse. I appreciated that I was able to keep someone alive that I thought would die for sure (even though I suffered for it.) Ultimately, what makes me give this 5 stars instead of 4 is that you can play the whole thing for free, which is rare in the Hosted/Choice of Games line up anymore. I look forward to the next part.