The plot is linear
Didn't finish because of the damn pay to play.
Pretty basic story and the price for such a short story is a bit too much
Misspelled words, poor grammar, and just really short.
Bad rating to make up for the guy that said he gave a good rating to make up for the people giving bad ratings.
Don't like it much too many typos and was really short but I have to say to those complaining about paying look at the comments thow the creator should put it in the description or something.
It's good but what does the healing sword ever do? I like all the characters but it ended up being Abit useless
While I'm usually I love with the stories from hosted game, this one was weak and the choices mostly superficial. The utter lack of proof reading is an insult to their paying customers. Just disappointing.
I hated it
Love this game, I play this game every day.
Wasn't clear it was a demo
Why do I have to pay?? Can't I just watch ads or something? I was into the story too.
It's an interesting story but it feels unfinished.
Says i can be male or female but when characters adress me it always as male..
Its a good story, though there are some typos. overall I like it
Riddled with spelling and grammar mistakes, this story is both juvenile and obtuse. 99¢ is too dear a price.
Eh... The writer has problems, mainly with homonyms and spelling, and the story is pretty basic. Probably a solid 5/10, which isn't bad but isn't good.
Gave a 3☆, mainly because of typos and grammar mistakes. Did this story not received any proof read? The bonus story doesn't even make any sense... or is there any prequel that I should be playing first...?
8/10 shock horror you have to pay for a book?! Seriously though decent story I'd a bit short but worth the price for sure
To everyone tht complained that you have to pay for the book, of course you do! Have you not bought a game from Hosted Games or Choice of Games LLC? You have to pay for it, giving a bad review for that is utterly retarded. My gripes are standard. Typos, nobody's perfect; how short it is, hopefully another story in this universe will be made as well; and I have nothing else have a great day and everyone that gives you a bad review for this is an idiot.
Giving good score to make up gor the unfairly bad ones, but there are problems. Translation is atrocious, almost but not quite unreadable. Not that many choices for a choose your own adventure. Get a native English speaker to correct the text and you'll stand a better chance that someone will pay for the rest. In spite of all that, free content is pretty delightful.
The book does not say itll cost money for the whole thing until you download the bullsht. Stop false advertising. I wouldn't have downloaded it if I knew.
Hey, this is totally set in the same world as "Twin Flames", isn't it? That's awesome! Dude, when Amy told me her story, that was the last thing i expected! Overall pretty good! I'll give it just 4 stars because, honestly, it's kinda short. I mean, i did like it, and for only 1$ it's far too good a deal, I'm not complaining. It's just that i want more. But it's nice nonetheless. And the romances are pretty neat! I enjoyed all of them quite a lot.