Hey, this is totally set in the same world as "Twin Flames", isn't it? That's awesome! Dude, when Amy told me her story, that was the last thing i expected! Overall pretty good! I'll give it just 4 stars because, honestly, it's kinda short. I mean, i did like it, and for only 1$ it's far too good a deal, I'm not complaining. It's just that i want more. But it's nice nonetheless. And the romances are pretty neat! I enjoyed all of them quite a lot.
The book does not say itll cost money for the whole thing until you download the bullsht. Stop false advertising. I wouldn't have downloaded it if I knew.
Giving good score to make up gor the unfairly bad ones, but there are problems. Translation is atrocious, almost but not quite unreadable. Not that many choices for a choose your own adventure. Get a native English speaker to correct the text and you'll stand a better chance that someone will pay for the rest. In spite of all that, free content is pretty delightful.
To everyone tht complained that you have to pay for the book, of course you do! Have you not bought a game from Hosted Games or Choice of Games LLC? You have to pay for it, giving a bad review for that is utterly retarded. My gripes are standard. Typos, nobody's perfect; how short it is, hopefully another story in this universe will be made as well; and I have nothing else have a great day and everyone that gives you a bad review for this is an idiot.
8/10 shock horror you have to pay for a book?! Seriously though decent story I'd a bit short but worth the price for sure
Gave a 3☆, mainly because of typos and grammar mistakes. Did this story not received any proof read? The bonus story doesn't even make any sense... or is there any prequel that I should be playing first...?
Eh... The writer has problems, mainly with homonyms and spelling, and the story is pretty basic. Probably a solid 5/10, which isn't bad but isn't good.
Riddled with spelling and grammar mistakes, this story is both juvenile and obtuse. 99¢ is too dear a price.
Its a good story, though there are some typos. overall I like it
Says i can be male or female but when characters adress me it always as male..
It's an interesting story but it feels unfinished.
Why do I have to pay?? Can't I just watch ads or something? I was into the story too.
Wasn't clear it was a demo
Love this game, I play this game every day.
I hated it
While I'm usually I love with the stories from hosted game, this one was weak and the choices mostly superficial. The utter lack of proof reading is an insult to their paying customers. Just disappointing.
It's good but what does the healing sword ever do? I like all the characters but it ended up being Abit useless
Don't like it much too many typos and was really short but I have to say to those complaining about paying look at the comments thow the creator should put it in the description or something.
Bad rating to make up for the guy that said he gave a good rating to make up for the people giving bad ratings.
Misspelled words, poor grammar, and just really short.
Pretty basic story and the price for such a short story is a bit too much
Didn't finish because of the damn pay to play.
The plot is linear