No Proper Thief

A good short story for what it was, but quickly you'll realize that you have *absolutely no* actual choices. It's simply "the right choice", the wrong choice, followed by instantly 'losing/failing/dying', or going insane for no legitimate reason, which ends the game. The "status bars" are completely useless and have no affect in anyway to the possible outcome, and I've tried them all. However the story just ignores your choices no matter what combination.

Beautiful story,character, vibe, and really descriptive hope to see more.

I really liked the story, but the choices were nonexistent.

Would recommend

A good short story, but a bit weird, and the logic is a bit off. There seemed to be little choices that could influence the plot.

I kind of like the lack of romance! Kept expecting the story to get too cheesy. Just fix a few typos and it's the perfect game.

I normally love hosted's games but with the amount of grammatical errors and spelling at some parts I didnt know what the game meant. Bad choices and the character has all of the effect rather than the player, even when you try to make it clear you want to take a certain role you keep getting it destroyed by the character. The choices and writing keeps trying to push you into certain lines of choices. The character makes me think "You thought if we announced she saw us they would be nice?" dont feel guilty.

I love all of your games

Its a good game,good choices,plot,and the dialogue is pretty good.though i dont find it worth its pricetag.

Why the location usage? I downloaded this to enjoy it, not to be given a segment and then told "Here's a cliffhanger. Now pay.".

Finished it in one sitting. Was a pretty good read but it had some grammatical errors in there that I spotted. The ending was predictable considering their names are Bonnie and Clyde. And choice don't matter, don't bother with this one guys

Nothing but love

I was railroaded into "liking" Bonnie. In reality I would put myself over a girl who claims she just HAS to come with me after I robbed the bank she just so happens to work at. I didn't feel anything when Zebra did the deed. Just said, "Over already?". Since Clyde was such a 'preset' character, he needed a lot more story to get inside his head. I get that they're 'Bonnie and Clyde' but there simply wasn't enough body to the CoG to portray their whirlwind romance. Free with an ad is a good price though.

This game is one of the best games from CoG. No Proper Thief provides a modern twist on an amazing classic. Definetly 10/10

Hey, I do know you put alot of work Into this, I think its kick AZs, but id love to see you make and entire idea based on the body snatcher opening, just a prayer, and like god...I know you got hand fulls, so just a prayer.......

Beautiful story,character, vibe, and really descriptive hope to see more.

I love it but I feel like you could've done a little more with this story I know they're like Bonnie And Clyde but maybe you could've expanded this topic a little more to make the story longer than it was other than that very good

Would recommend

Expected more

No Proper Thief

Too short

Finished it in one sitting. Was a pretty good read but it had some grammatical errors in there that I spotted. The ending was predictable considering their names are Bonnie and Clyde. And choice don't matter, don't bother with this one guys

i luv all ur free games hope you make the others free too so we could play em

Why the location usage? I downloaded this to enjoy it, not to be given a segment and then told "Here's a cliffhanger. Now pay.".

If I wanted to be forced on a character instead of putting myself in, I would play TinManGame's gamebooks, not go to Hostedgames and choiceofgames for quality content. The primary reason most people get their games Its because of their beautiful story and very immersive aspect. This had neither. Just above of Blade of Elements for me. Learn from this blunder and improve yourself accordingly

Finished it in one sitting. Was a pretty good read but it had some grammatical errors in there that I spotted. The ending was predictable considering their names are Bonnie and Clyde.

The simple fact that this game has a pre named protagonist makes it an instant no-play for me, not to mention the boring premise and lack of real choices. This is not a good Hosted/Choice Of game.